[+iPok]

Poem written by me long time ago and yeah i know I'm not really good ; )

For every sleepless night,
For every hour spent,
For each silent moment of memory,
Now I finally decided to,
burn my desire.

A desire that keeps waking me,
A desire for getting my soul,
A desire for getting my life,
Now i finally decided to
burn my desire.

Forgets the shadow of past,
Nothing to got my trust,
When you left me in a rain,
When you left me with a pain.

Don't say a word,
Coz I'll go back on the thing I believe
But I'm afraid you will forget about me.

Now I'm afraid to getting my soul,
afraid to getting my desire
Nothing to got my trust,
Nothing to got any hope,
Coz I finally decided to
burn my desire.

[pacg45]

Thats an interesting poem...

You should keep writing - you'll get a lot better. I like your style and ideas.

[+iPok]

Thanks for the kind words : D.
I really appreciated it.

[pacg45]

Thanks for the kind words : D.
I really appreciated it.

Your welcome! I love poetry...

[Nature]

Keep writing. You have to start from somewhere, and I enjoyed the poem, but I believe that you can get better.

[Legendary_CnC]

That's a nice piece for having it written your self. Keep on doing what your doing!

[Nature]

That's a nice piece for having it written your self. Keep on doing what your doing!

Aren't all poems written by one poet?

[Greed]

Holy crap nice poem, I will make one in a jiffy

[OversouL]

Nice poem. Did you make this for a school project or just felt like making it? : $

[+iPok]

Nice poem. Did you make this for a school project or just felt like making it? : $

I just felt like making it. I love poem : D