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Burn My Desire - +iPok - 04-02-2013
Poem written by me long time ago and yeah i know I'm not really good ; )
For every sleepless night,
For every hour spent,
For each silent moment of memory,
Now I finally decided to,
burn my desire.
A desire that keeps waking me,
A desire for getting my soul,
A desire for getting my life,
Now i finally decided to
burn my desire.
Forgets the shadow of past,
Nothing to got my trust,
When you left me in a rain,
When you left me with a pain.
Don't say a word,
Coz I'll go back on the thing I believe
But I'm afraid you will forget about me.
Now I'm afraid to getting my soul,
afraid to getting my desire
Nothing to got my trust,
Nothing to got any hope,
Coz I finally decided to
burn my desire.
For every hour spent,
For each silent moment of memory,
Now I finally decided to,
burn my desire.
A desire that keeps waking me,
A desire for getting my soul,
A desire for getting my life,
Now i finally decided to
burn my desire.
Forgets the shadow of past,
Nothing to got my trust,
When you left me in a rain,
When you left me with a pain.
Don't say a word,
Coz I'll go back on the thing I believe
But I'm afraid you will forget about me.
Now I'm afraid to getting my soul,
afraid to getting my desire
Nothing to got my trust,
Nothing to got any hope,
Coz I finally decided to
burn my desire.
Burn My Desire - pacg45 - 04-03-2013
Thats an interesting poem...
You should keep writing - you'll get a lot better. I like your style and ideas.
Burn My Desire - +iPok - 04-03-2013
Thanks for the kind words : D.
I really appreciated it.
RE: Burn My Desire - pacg45 - 04-03-2013
(04-03-2013, 01:21 PM)+iPok Wrote: Thanks for the kind words : D.
I really appreciated it.
Your welcome! I love poetry...
RE: Burn My Desire - Nature - 04-05-2013
Keep writing. You have to start from somewhere, and I enjoyed the poem, but I believe that you can get better.
Burn My Desire - Legendary_CnC - 04-05-2013
That's a nice piece for having it written your self. Keep on doing what your doing!
RE: Burn My Desire - Nature - 04-05-2013
(04-05-2013, 02:51 AM)Legendary Wrote: That's a nice piece for having it written your self. Keep on doing what your doing!
Aren't all poems written by one poet?
Burn My Desire - Greed - 04-05-2013
Holy crap nice poem, I will make one in a jiffy
RE: Burn My Desire - OversouL - 04-05-2013
Nice poem. Did you make this for a school project or just felt like making it? : $
RE: Burn My Desire - +iPok - 04-05-2013
(04-05-2013, 10:12 AM)OversouL Wrote: Nice poem. Did you make this for a school project or just felt like making it? : $
I just felt like making it. I love poem : D