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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. 10-28-2013, 10:42 AM
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It looks really good man, I like that it's simplistic.
(some people should jump. :p)
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. 10-28-2013, 11:56 AM
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Maybe make the jumper a tad smaller? He's bigger than the buildings, lol.
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. 10-28-2013, 04:00 PM
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The Jumper is far from the main focus here, and the text is overly annoying to read for me. The buildings also takes a lot of the focus, not to mention that the size of the buildings are wrong compared to the jumper as Muzzy already said.
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. 10-28-2013, 04:16 PM
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I would make it all continuous buildings rather than have spaces between them like with the ones on the left. Otherwise, I really like this. I would even shrink the text a little more on the top left. Solid piece though.
7.5/10
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. 11-12-2013, 05:25 PM
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Lol, kinda random but the all-in-all effect looks good. Though the guy should've been a little smaller.
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