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Jumper | You should never feel like this. #1
Hey,

I was just messing around with landscapes in PS, and then posted in DB chat & Dale suggested to do a suicide jumper so I did it and added things to it.

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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #2
It looks really good man, I like that it's simplistic.
(some people should jump. :p)

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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #3
Thanks Kirito, hehe.
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #4
Maybe make the jumper a tad smaller? He's bigger than the buildings, lol.

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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #5
(10-28-2013, 11:56 AM)Muzzy Wrote: Maybe make the jumper a tad smaller? He's bigger than the buildings, lol.

Thanks Muzzy, I know but I wanted him to be the main focus.
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #6
The Jumper is far from the main focus here, and the text is overly annoying to read for me. The buildings also takes a lot of the focus, not to mention that the size of the buildings are wrong compared to the jumper as Muzzy already said.

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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #7
Meh, thanks Ichi though.
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #8
I would make it all continuous buildings rather than have spaces between them like with the ones on the left. Otherwise, I really like this. I would even shrink the text a little more on the top left. Solid piece though.

7.5/10

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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #9
Thanks Matt, I agree with that but I was too lazyTongue
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RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. #10
Lol, kinda random but the all-in-all effect looks good. Though the guy should've been a little smaller.
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