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Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Auth - 10-28-2013
Hey,
I was just messing around with landscapes in PS, and then posted in DB chat & Dale suggested to do a suicide jumper so I did it and added things to it.
![[Image: jLmJZXlGG3uMs.png]](http://i.minus.com/jLmJZXlGG3uMs.png)
I was just messing around with landscapes in PS, and then posted in DB chat & Dale suggested to do a suicide jumper so I did it and added things to it.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Nefarious - 10-28-2013
It looks really good man, I like that it's simplistic.
(some people should jump. :p)
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Auth - 10-28-2013
Thanks Kirito, hehe.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Cosmic - 10-28-2013
Maybe make the jumper a tad smaller? He's bigger than the buildings, lol.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Auth - 10-28-2013
(10-28-2013, 11:56 AM)Muzzy Wrote: Maybe make the jumper a tad smaller? He's bigger than the buildings, lol.
Thanks Muzzy, I know but I wanted him to be the main focus.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Kureo - 10-28-2013
The Jumper is far from the main focus here, and the text is overly annoying to read for me. The buildings also takes a lot of the focus, not to mention that the size of the buildings are wrong compared to the jumper as Muzzy already said.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Auth - 10-28-2013
Meh, thanks Ichi though.
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Matt - 10-28-2013
I would make it all continuous buildings rather than have spaces between them like with the ones on the left. Otherwise, I really like this. I would even shrink the text a little more on the top left. Solid piece though.
7.5/10
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Auth - 10-28-2013
Thanks Matt, I agree with that but I was too lazy
RE: Jumper | You should never feel like this. - Exiled - 11-12-2013
Lol, kinda random but the all-in-all effect looks good. Though the guy should've been a little smaller.