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First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #1
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Any thoughts on this piece?
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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #2
I think it looks pretty good but the tips still need to be defined a bit more.

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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #3
I actually like it a lot. It looks very nice. 10/10 would bang. Biggrin

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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #4
It is a decent one bro.
You are getting good day by day. xD

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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #5
(11-25-2013, 12:23 AM)Brandon Wrote: I think it looks pretty good but the tips still need to be defined a bit more.

Yeah, notice "first attempt"?
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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #6
Looks nice, i'd make the edges and points sharp instead of rounded! 8/10

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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #7
(11-25-2013, 05:18 PM)Lewis Wrote: Looks nice, i'd make the edges and points sharp instead of rounded! 8/10

Yeah, I'm still trying to improve.
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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #8
Looks nice for a first attempt! Change the colors though.

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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #9
(11-25-2013, 05:26 PM)Mafia Wrote: Looks nice for a first attempt! Change the colors though.

Light green/ red maybe?
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RE: First attempt at making a "Ribbon". #10
(11-25-2013, 05:28 PM)Exiled Wrote:
(11-25-2013, 05:26 PM)Mafia Wrote: Looks nice for a first attempt! Change the colors though.

Light green/ red maybe?

No, more darker. Also try adding noise, that looks nice. Confusedmile:

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