[Eclipse]

The edit looks way better. As @Adorapuff said, be careful with that inner shadow. In my experience, shadows, gradients, and glows can do a lot of damage to a clean image if you don't have a clue how to use them.

Yeah, that's what others said too. I'll just remove it.

The color of the text makes it blend with the background. Lookup color theory and watch some videos about it.

Thank you. I'm pretty much a beginner, so this'll be useful.