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Iron Man first smudge - OversouL - 05-16-2013

Well I tried again, but this time it's a smudge. :') Experts, What can you say please? :embarrased:
I also noticed that I deleted the .PSD files of my first 2 designs. :'(

I think it's too bright. :\
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RE: Iron Man first smudge - Wonders - 05-16-2013

Hmm, I quite like it although I think maybe there's too much red.. try blending in another color?

RE: Iron Man first smudge - OversouL - 05-16-2013

(05-16-2013, 12:00 PM)Wonders Wrote: Hmm, I quite like it although I think maybe there's too much red.. try blending in another color?

I kinda wanted it to be equal with yellow, but I messed up and the took over. :embarrased:

RE: Iron Man first smudge - Alex - 05-16-2013

This smudge doesn't have much flow.

RE: Iron Man first smudge - OversouL - 05-16-2013

(05-16-2013, 12:15 PM)Jinx Wrote: This smudge doesn't have much flow.

What do you mean by flow? :\

RE: Iron Man first smudge - Big - 05-16-2013

This is so sick! Nice job Oversoul!

RE: Iron Man first smudge - Valentino - 05-19-2013

I think you've done a pretty good job with the background and there's a nice mix of colours. There are some areas that are a bit too bright but for the most part it's not too bad at all. Some parts of Iron Man seem a tad too sharp though, when sharpening it up try lowering the opacity of that layer so it doesn't make it look choppy. Another suggestion is to work with a slightly smaller canvas. I usually do 400x240 or so; gives you enough room to play with but not so much room that the signature ends up looking empty Wink

RE: Iron Man first smudge - OversouL - 05-19-2013

(05-19-2013, 02:16 AM)Valentino Wrote: I think you've done a pretty good job with the background and there's a nice mix of colours. There are some areas that are a bit too bright but for the most part it's not too bad at all. Some parts of Iron Man seem a tad too sharp though, when sharpening it up try lowering the opacity of that layer so it doesn't make it look choppy. Another suggestion is to work with a slightly smaller canvas. I usually do 400x240 or so; gives you enough room to play with but not so much room that the signature ends up looking empty Wink

Thanks, that really helps a lot ^_^