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Sinister Stories - Zephyrus - 05-23-2016
I made this for a project I'm working on with a friend, let me know what you guys think
I could of made it a lot better, but I was kind of in a hurry. I'll probably edit it some more later on down the road.
The blue lines in this one are ruler lines, they'll be gone:
![[Image: qNkScVh.png]](http://i.imgur.com/qNkScVh.png)
The background for this one is actually transparent (just to throw that out there xD):
![[Image: JOgvbrV.png]](http://i.imgur.com/JOgvbrV.png)
RE: Sinister Stories - VirtualFrost - 05-23-2016
I'm not really a graphic master so what I say may not be helpful.
The logo doesn't seem so 'HD' or clear, it seems a little blurry, mostly the "SS". It looks okay, it doesn't really appeal to me, not sure how I'd improve it, I'm not really into it. All work can always be improved, good luck with it!
RE: Sinister Stories - yokai - 05-23-2016
The thing that bothers me the most is the fact that the edges aren't crisp and sharp. They look like a air-brush, while it seems like you tried to mimic a blood like feel for it. If you could work on that with some layer styles, and maybe some cutting in the text then I think you would see massive improvements.
RE: Sinister Stories - Zephyrus - 05-23-2016
(05-23-2016, 07:06 PM)VirtualFrost Wrote: I'm not really a graphic master so what I say may not be helpful.
The logo doesn't seem so 'HD' or clear, it seems a little blurry, mostly the "SS". It looks okay, it doesn't really appeal to me, not sure how I'd improve it, I'm not really into it. All work can always be improved, good luck with it!
Yea, it got stretched a lot, I think thats why. Thanks for the feedback though, Ill definitely try to fix that!
(05-23-2016, 07:40 PM)Inton Wrote: The thing that bothers me the most is the fact that the edges aren't crisp and sharp. They look like a air-brush, while it seems like you tried to mimic a blood like feel for it. If you could work on that with some layer styles, and maybe some cutting in the text then I think you would see massive improvements.
Thank you for the feedback
RE: Sinister Stories - PapaJoy - 05-23-2016
I like the second one alot better then the first. I am guessing this was in photoshop. Use illustrator for logos and such then put into photoshop to tweak it up.
Not a fan of the background on the first one. The smoke looks flat. But I really wanna see the site xD