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Writers UB - Awaken - 02-22-2016
Idk stupid userbar I made in 10 minutes or so, can't really get any ideas so tell me what you guys think and what I should add / remove.
![[Image: Pth3d61.png]](http://i.imgur.com/Pth3d61.png)
RE: Writers UB - Natsu - 02-22-2016
Oddly enough, I don't like it yet I don't know why I dislike it..
For starters the border is very weird to me and it doesn't leave enough room for design. Literally looks like a rectangle with chopped off edges.
Not really a fan of the font, especially since there's no effect to it ( glow, shadow, etc. )
I don't think the concept you had in mind is exactly bad, but the outcome probably didn't turn out like you expected it to. No hate, just trying to help you improve.
RE: Writers UB - Awaken - 02-22-2016
(02-22-2016, 10:39 PM)Natsu Wrote: Oddly enough, I don't like it yet I don't know why I dislike it..
For starters the border is very weird to me and it doesn't leave enough room for design. Literally looks like a rectangle with chopped off edges.
Not really a fan of the font, especially since there's no effect to it ( glow, shadow, etc. )
I don't think the concept you had in mind is exactly bad, but the outcome probably didn't turn out like you expected it to. No hate, just trying to help you improve.
Right, the idea I had in mind was more different, I did also make the shape with the pen tool and curved each side but I guess I didn't curve them that much since it does look like solid lines which were chopped off as you said. Trying to re-make it right now.
RE: Writers UB - Natsu - 02-22-2016
(02-22-2016, 10:43 PM)Awaken Wrote: Right, the idea I had in mind was more different, I did also make the shape with the pen tool and curved each side but I guess I didn't curve them that much since it does look like solid lines which were chopped off as you said. Trying to re-make it right now.
Glad you're taking effort to improve. That's a true artist. You'll get a lot better over time, trust me. Keep at it.
And have some rep
RE: Writers UB - Harry_mybb_import13603 - 02-22-2016
Looks pretty funky if you ask me ^^.
RE: Writers UB - Almighty - 02-22-2016
It's not bad looking but I can see room for improvement on it like @109 said. I feel like it needs to pack more of a punch if you get what I mean.