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My Latest Web design - Mafia - 05-11-2013
Hey guys rate my newest web design. Made for a client who is making an antivirus.
Want your opinions!
Image:
http://prntscr.com/14fmif
Please tell me how I could improve
Sorry about the quality, I had to zoom out
Cheers
Poi
RE: My Latest Web design - Judas - 05-11-2013
Don't really like it.
Use a bolder font, don't make your own icons if you're not good at it.
Also, why is the bottom part transparent?
4/10
RE: My Latest Web design - Ronnie - 05-11-2013
It's alright, don't like the gold colour.
What did you use to make it, purely html?
RE: My Latest Web design - Judas - 05-11-2013
(05-11-2013, 06:21 PM)Ronnie Wrote: It's alright, don't like the gold colour.
What did you use to make it, purely html?
He probably just made it in photoshop for practice and has no intention of actually turning it into an actual website.
RE: My Latest Web design - Jay - 05-11-2013
There's definitely a lot that needs to be done and changed here. Aside from having various shape tool boxes and light gradients on them, the text is too skinny, when web designing you should usually stick to default Windows fonts as they are web ready.
Colors are too bold and bland making it look like it was done too quickly, ad texturing and or try to make it professional.
For help just take a look at themes over at www.themeforest.com.
RE: My Latest Web design - Slim - 05-11-2013
Generally just don't like it. I honestly don't like the entire look of it, hopefully I don't offend you but I think it is better that I just say exactly what I feel straight up otherwise it will never improve and you will be stuck at the same level.
- The header isn't centered against the rest of the page
- The main text box beside the image looks ugly, the black font color inside doesn't suit and there should be padding between the box sides and the text if you insist on it being there
- Still on the subject of the box, justify or left align the text
- Remove the polka dot background or make the dots smaller and wash them out in a grey color (almost white)
- Use proper icons the different headings, either create your own or download a set
- If you create your own - size them correctly to be the same size and reduce the color to a darker grey OR the same as the yellow background
- Align the text alongside the images the same on each separate heading, the '100% Protection' heading is differently aligned compared to the 'Networks with Data' - move the data one so it fits with the 100% protection
- Turn those two main headings mentioned above into actual headings, make them larger like <h2> tags would be if you were actually coding this
- All the fonts used are the same, you should have heading fonts and then a body font. The body font should be a simple Serif font OR something like Arial or Helvetica.
- Heading font can be anything, just not the same as the logo font
- Navigation links actually look ok, I could probably live with the font on them but Home should come before Forums
Try looking online for inspiration or contact me for some guidance, from what I see I am assuming you haven't done this before.