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Rate my story :D - White Charisma - 10-12-2011 So i'm in 9th grade, and i had to re-write a fairytale. so i chose little red riding hood read my version and rate it <3 Spoiler:
Once upon a time, there was a girl called red riding. She wasn't a very nice girl, she was spoilt, arrogant, and very, very malicious. One day, she though about going to see her nan for some cash, So, as an excuse, she stole some cakes from her mom and went on her way, pulling on her red hoodie. On her way she saw some flowers, she thought " they would look awesome on my wall " as they were blood red roses. So she went and picked a few, when she had finished, she looked up. she had lost her way on the path, and had no idea where she had ended up. Meanwhile, a wolf had seen her, and sussed out where she was going. so he cooked up a plan to get to her nans house first. and eat her when she came close. When red got to her nans house, the wolf had stolen her nans clothes and locked her in the cupboard, so he was safe to do as he pleased as he got into bed. When red opened the door however, she knew instantly it was the wolf, as his leg was hanging outside the bed. So she thought "I have an idea." So, she said "Hey, nan. You alright?" "yes dear" said the wolf, they talked for a while, not about anything in particular, until she saw a woodcutter walking past, and she grabbed her chance "HELP" She screamed, and the wolf jumped, startled. The woodcutter raced into the house, saw the wolf, and fired his shotgun at the wolf, unfortunately, it backfired on him, propelling him against the wall, instantly unconscious. "Damn" she thought, the wolf ran at her, so she did a backwards somersalt, grabbed the shotgun, and fired it 4 times at the wolf. He dropped to the floor, blood pouring out of the giant hole in his body. She cocked the shotgun again and slung it over her shoulder, "hmmm" she thought, i'll keep hold of this!" she smiled, and left the house. unfortunately, she forgot about her nan, who was still locked in the cupboard. and who was stuck their for 3 days, until red remembered about her, wnd went to get her out and she still got 250 quid! Is it shit? D: RE: Rate my story :D - Jacob - 10-12-2011 its not shit, but its different xD RE: Rate my story :D - White Charisma - 10-12-2011 ^^ xD well, i couldn't think of anything else without including some pure 18+ inces, beastiality and swearing. :3 RE: Rate my story :D - wallykillaz - 10-12-2011 (10-12-2011, 08:11 PM)Immortal Phoenix Wrote: ^^ xD Lol Of Course You Would Think Of THat RE: Rate my story :D - White Charisma - 10-12-2011 ^^^ see, some people who dont know me even know i'm a sick bastard! ;D RE: Rate my story :D - jammy7777 - 10-13-2011 i hate to read stories. but love to hear
RE: Rate my story :D - Zabra - 10-13-2011 I read the LOTR when I was in Ninth ... Try growing Up ...
RE: Rate my story :D - crackme0P3N - 10-14-2011 rofl...................... u guys gotta hear Cartman's stories!!.................. RE: Rate my story :D - Shining White - 10-14-2011 you should tell me before you change your name
RE: Rate my story :D - White Charisma - 10-14-2011 Bahaha, lol, shining i change my name more than a girl changes cock
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