[DeathAdder]

Hey Guys, I'm making this thread for a friend of mine (Thresio) because his internet is so poor.

He hasn't been able to send me the work he has done on his computer, so he has just sent me what he has created using an app on his phone. Any suggestions or feedback I will relay over to him. ( I did the poor sound spectrum, but it was just something so I could get it uploaded to youtube for him )

This is his work called "Loucast"

Spoiler:

Any feedback or suggestions will be greatly appreciated! I will be uploading more of his work on his youtube account in the future until he is able to do so himself.

[ProfessorChill]

Hm, I sadly feel he's been using presets and such, not a good wing to fall under, also the repetition of one rhythm is no way to lengthen a song, it's fairly repetitive. I do a bit of repetition in my work however I ALWAYS limit my repeats to two bars, never a whole song.

However, tell him to keep up the work and maybe [not to promote but it's really good] try Z3ta+ by cakewalk or NI Massive <also good<<<< instead of what seems to be presets.

IF he isn't using presets I'm sorry but this song just seems like it's missing something.

[DeathAdder]

Hm, I sadly feel he's been using presets and such, not a good wing to fall under, also the repetition of one rhythm is no way to lengthen a song, it's fairly repetitive. I do a bit of repetition in my work however I ALWAYS limit my repeats to two bars, never a whole song.

However, tell him to keep up the work and maybe [not to promote but it's really good] try Z3ta+ by cakewalk or NI Massive <also good<<<< instead of what seems to be presets.

IF he isn't using presets I'm sorry but this song just seems like it's missing something.

Yeah I gotcha. His other songs I've listened to that he's created using FL Studio aren't near as repetitive, I think this one is more or less because he made it on his phone and couldn't do a whole lot of anything else. I have a couple of other songs he has made on his phone, and one of his first ones he made in FL Studio that I will upload and show on here for feedback.

In conclusion, I thank you and he thanks you for the feedback and he said he will keep with it.

[Eclipse]

It sounds nice, the best is good but as Prof. said, it's a bit repetitive.