[Phoenix_mybb_import14303]

I feel like I've seen this design elsewhere before.. if you are the actual creator then you didn't make bad work but it just seems familiar.

[Jeteroll]

I think this is an alright attempt, but the design is a little bit too cartoon-looking to me. The details are pretty basic and there isn't much depth here. Overall, the shape is a little too rectangular for my taste, it really needs to have a less defined shape. Also, the text looks a bit like it is just slapped on there, it should fit the design better.

Sorry if I come off as harsh on the criticism, I've been with a lot of graphic designers over the years and I'm used to feedback like this

[glacegfx]

thank you for the desigbn
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