My own UK HIP HOP attempt.

BreShiE · 04-25-2014, 10:40 AM

(04-24-2014, 07:40 PM)Civil Wrote: I'm from near Preston mate, ever heard of Blackpool haha?

Blackpewl. Yeah I have, I've been there on holiday.

Civil · 04-26-2014, 11:43 AM

(04-25-2014, 09:42 AM)vegimite Wrote: no prize, fuck. poor guy.

"if i would give you any advice it would be to make sure, that you always fulfill your life I know its cliche"

doesnt rhyme.

but on a serious note rap battle me.

"If i could give you one bit of advice,
it'd be to make sure that you always fulfil your life,
I know its cliche, but you won't live twice.

It's called an extended rhyme scheme.

(04-25-2014, 10:40 AM)BreShiE Wrote: Blackpewl. Yeah I have, I've been there on holiday.

haha well I live about 45 minutes from Blackpool some shit excuse of a "city" called Lancaster.

Contingency · 04-26-2014, 02:05 PM

(04-26-2014, 11:43 AM)Civil Wrote: "If i could give you one bit of advice,
it'd be to make sure that you always fulfil your life,
I know its cliche, but you won't live twice.

It's called an extended rhyme scheme.

haha well I live about 45 minutes from Blackpool some shit excuse of a "city" called Lancaster.

I live near Cambridge down south...been to both Lancaster and Blackpool.

BreShiE · 04-28-2014, 09:12 PM

(04-26-2014, 11:43 AM)Civil Wrote: haha well I live about 45 minutes from Blackpool some shit excuse of a "city" called Lancaster.

Yeah I've heard of Lancaster before. I'm not too far away from there myself.

Satan · 04-30-2014, 02:54 PM

(04-28-2014, 09:12 PM)BreShiE Wrote: Yeah I've heard of Lancaster before. I'm not too far away from there myself.

Mildly off-topic, but is Leeds actually racist? Heard is a bad city for that.

Ot, I like it honestly. Improve, get signed, then rap about the forum, yiss

cr33pyguy · 04-30-2014, 11:32 PM

I like it. You're a bit monotone, but otherwise it's great.

My own UK HIP HOP attempt.
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