[Rivalry]

Has the potential but you've made some weird design choices.
Why is there a random red part sticking out of the grey text? It doesn't improve the look.
Also, the part where the two words join could be smoothed out with the pen tool or an eraser.
You should only have one central highlight, too; it will look nicer than two highlights.

Overall it's a good idea, but it looks like you finished it, and then sat there and went 'Hm. I could add this to it...' and it just sort of made it worse than it could be.

[Kureo]

Has the potential but you've made some weird design choices.
Why is there a random red part sticking out of the grey text? It doesn't improve the look.
Also, the part where the two words join could be smoothed out with the pen tool or an eraser.
You should only have one central highlight, too; it will look nicer than two highlights.

Overall it's a good idea, but it looks like you finished it, and then sat there and went 'Hm. I could add this to it...' and it just sort of made it worse than it could be.

The reason I have red thingy from the white text is because I though it looked kinda naked without it.. The reason I didn't smooth or do anything to the meeting of the words, is mainly because I HATE that.. I actually only used 1 highlight, its only darker in the middle.. Thanks for the feedback and tips, I will take them into considerations!