Twelve Years of Service
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RE: Art. 12-21-2013, 08:39 AM
#3
I don't feel like taking up the challlenge ^. Now the things I'm about to say are advice; I'm not bashing you in any way just wanting you to improve.
Well I think the face is tilted at an odd angle,
The boobs are way too far down, imo.
The arm (my right) looks rather weird with that supposed jacket incline.
Other than those things not half-bad.
You can take my advice or leave it.
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Twelve Years of Service
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RE: Art. 12-21-2013, 08:44 AM
#6
Add a hint of blue on her coat.
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Thirteen Years of Service
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RE: Art. 12-21-2013, 02:32 PM
#10
Honestly it looks good but the only things I've noticed is that dent in the right arm and those really low breasts.
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