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Any good? 05-13-2014, 02:44 AM #1
For some reason, my class was assigned to write horror stories. Seems a bit weird for 8th grade but whatever. Here's my first shot at it. Please tell me if I should add or change anything. (and yeah, I know, it's morbid and pretty fucked up.)
http://goo.gl/WBxakh
It's often the outcasts, the iconoclasts ... those who have the least to lose because they
don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.

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RE: Any good? 05-13-2014, 02:56 AM #2
Dem paragraphs doe.
(you should break it down into paragraphs)

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RE: Any good? 05-13-2014, 02:57 AM #3
(05-13-2014, 02:56 AM)Maxx Wrote: Dem paragraphs doe.
(you should break it down into paragraphs)
Ughhhhh.. formatting... why..
It's often the outcasts, the iconoclasts ... those who have the least to lose because they
don't have much in the first place, who feel the new currents and ride them the farthest.

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